Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Wildelyn: Journey to the OtherWorld (Chapter 1)

           Eleanor was falling; to where, she hadn’t the faintest idea. The only thing she was fully aware of at the moment was the terrible falling sensation blooming within her chest, spreading across her bones and making terror stab itself into her heart. Her limbs flailed in panic, desperate to escape this nightmare. But gravity did its job well and sent the girl plummeting down a blank white world.
      Ellie’s feet finally touched the ground and she stumbled slightly, surprised at how the impact hadn’t knocked her dead. Glancing around, she realized that she was in a room devoid of any adornment or color. The world around her was simply one large white planet, free of any sort of population or any sign of human or animal dwelling. The glare from the pure whiteness around her stung her eyes and she blinked, trying to clear away the ache.
      “I see you have come.” 
       Startled, the girl looked up, eyes panning around the area in search of the owner of that soft, melodious voice. Her eyes fell on a beautiful figure standing before her, tall and imposing with gentle features and a majestic attire. Soft blue eyes adorned a pale face framed by locks of fair hair that fell down her back in a waterfall of shimmering gold. A golden circlet wound around her head and was dotted with all manner of flowers, a rich emerald vine intertwining with the glimmering metal. Her attire was absolutely gorgeous, a flowing sleeveless dress that pooled around her ankles, fully covering her legs modestly. A smile graced the woman’s lips as she lifted a hand to stroke the dumb-stricken girl’s hair.
      “Do not be afraid,” the soft voice murmured, so gentle was the tone that it nearly made Ellie drowsy. “Though we might be slightly different in species, we are still much alike – and you are destined for something amazing.”
      Ellie cocked a quizzical eyebrow. Different in species? How so?
       “Just remember, Eleanor Alicia,” the woman said, smiling in a nearly pitiful fashion. “When the time comes, do not be afraid – a friend will help you lead the way. Just remember the name Ami – Ami Forsythia. She is the girl that will help open the gate.”
      “Wha-what do you mean?” Ellie spoke up, voice squeaky and nervous. The woman seemed to be talking in riddles – Ellie hadn’t the foggiest idea of the words she murmured, but they somehow felt important, which just added to the headache.
          “You’ll know in time,” the woman smiled, patting the girl reassuringly on the shoulder. Her image seemed to be slowly fading away, blending into the blank background. “All in due time.”
      It was at that point that Ellie’s eyelids flew open, ending the dream that had clouded her senses. She sat up with a jolt, squinting in the semi-darkness of her bedroom as if the woman from earlier was hiding within it, watching her warily with those gentle blue eyes of hers. As usual, a sense of unease had crawled into the pit of her stomach and seemed quite reluctant to fade, much to her irritation. Swallowing thickly, Ellie snatched up the blankets she had tangled around her legs and drew them up to her chin, covering her form in the soft material before resting her head back onto her pillow. Hesitantly, she shut her eyelids and tried to fade back into her slumber but she found herself unable to. Sighing, she rolled onto her back and stared lamely at the ceiling that hung above her.
      It was that dream again.
      The one that came to her every night.
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         It had been nearly a month ago that those same, odd dreams began to haunt her, replaying themselves in her mind like a videotape stuck on repeat. Each and every night when she had allowed her eyelids to close, it would be the same dream – the same blank room, the same woman, with different things to say to her every time.
       All the words that the woman had murmured to her were cryptic, always without an explanation and always about her being ‘destined for something amazing’. The few times it had happened she remarked on it to her mother, but when it became a recurring thing she no longer had to courage to explain, even to her family or best friends. It just seemed too…unrealistic. How could the exact same dream repeat itself over and over in her head for nearly a month? She struggled to find an answer for this seemingly unsolvable question until it felt like she was going insane.
     Her best friend Jackie, of course, hadn’t been the least bit sympathetic. “Maybe you’re going bonkers,” she chuckled one day when Ellie felt obliged to enlighten her, making light of what she thought was quite a serious thing. “Or maybe you’ve been watching too much TV. ‘Destined for something amazing’? How cliché!!”
      It was at that point in the conversation that Ellie would smack the laughing girl on the back of her head in a futile attempt to silence her. Jackie did mean well, but sometimes she didn’t think before blurting things out and it sometimes got on her nerves enormously. She didn’t mean to be cross with the brunette all the time, but she felt this was a serious matter and it didn’t help that her friend was simply giggling at the mere thought of it like it was comedy relief in a TV show.
      She wanted answers.
      But no one could give them.
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       School next day had been typical, not sparking any sort of interest in the girl and making her wish that the clock would tick faster and end each dreary period she had to live through. She could not even chat with Jackie due to the fact that the seats had been arranged in a terrible fashion and the two had been divided into two completely different rows of seats quite a distance from each other. And it didn’t help much that the seat next to her was the only blank seat in the classroom so she could not even make small talk with whoever could’ve been sitting there. Sighing, the girl twiddled her pencil between her fingers, watching the wooden writing tool spin in her hands. This would be a long day.
       “Class? May I have your attention?” Miss Morgans called from the front of the class. Ellie’s attention was caught and she turned to look at the teacher, grim-faced and annoyed at the fact that most of the students weren’t paying the least bit notice. Coughing discreetly, the woman announced in the loudest voice she could muster: “Class!! We have a new student!!”
      Some heads turned, but most still ignored the loud bellows coming from the teacher’s mouth.
      Dismissing the students that refused to listen, Miss Morgans turned to the doors of the classroom and beckoned the hidden person forward into the room. Slowly, the small form of a girl appeared from behind the large doors, face hidden by a drooping fringe of red hair. Ellie cocked an inquisitive brow at the sight of the shy girl – she didn’t seem like the happiest of fellows. Her shoulders were hunched up, her gaze on the ground and not bothering the least to swipe away the hair that was concealing her face. She wore the regular blue-and-white uniform of the school and the bag she clutched tightly in both hands looked worn and frayed, ripped in several places. Her bright red hair was tied into a long braid that tumbled down her back and only one green eye was visible from behind her long fringe. She regarded the classroom of students staring at her shamelessly with an unreadable expression, doing her best to avoid their curious gazes.
      “Class, this is Ami Forsythia, a transfer student. Now, I want you all to be nice to her, alright?” Miss Morgans announced, hands gesturing at the dithering girl standing meekly at the front. The teacher nudged the student lightly and asked: “Now Ami, why not you tell the class about yourself?”
     “They don’t need to know anything about me,” Ami mumbled, still continuing to stare at the ground. “I’m not going to stay here long, anyway.”
         The class fell silent at the girl’s slightly mournful tone and her resistance at explaining her origins before the teacher coughed again into her fist and ended the awkward moment. “Well! That’s fine. If you prefer a little privacy, I understand. Now, go sit anywhere you like.”
       The last line was unnecessary, considering the fact that the only vacant seat in the entire classroom was the one positioned next to Ellie. As the girl shuffled miserably towards the empty chair, Ellie followed her with widened eyes. She recognized the name of the new student and she knew why – it was the name the mysterious woman in her dreams and mentioned. Did that mean this girl was special somehow? How did her dream give her the name to a girl that just happened to be transferring to her school the very next day. The thoughts spun around her mind like a whirlpool until she had to shut her eyes for a few moments to clear away the headache that was slowly forming.
      In the same cheerless fashion, the redhead kicked at the chair beside her before settling herself onto it, dropping her bag on the floor next to her feet. The air around her seemed to emit a depressing feel, as if all happiness had long since been sucked dry from the girl, leaving her to be a sad shell of gloom and despair. As Miss Morgans continued on her lesson, the class soon lost interest in the petite girl that had positioned herself next to Ellie, resuming their chats and giggles. Ellie tried to focus on the words Miss Morgans was spouting but she was much too engrossed in her dream and the connection it had with this girl. Could she be the answer to her recurring dreams? The notion brought excitement to her heart.
      Gently, Ellie inched closer to the sulky girl and nudged her slightly on the hand. “Um, hey; can I ask you a que-”
      “Leave me alone,” the girl grumbled, turning away from Ellie and the words she wanted to say. Ellie’s eyebrows rose, her words stopping midsentence. She hadn’t quite expected such a negative reaction from such a shy looking girl. But judging from the sadness that blatantly showed from her quivering shoulders and her depressed features, there was a story hidden behind her – one that Ellie was aching to find out. She wanted to know more about this girl and why she had been mentioned in her dreams. She had to find out the connection. It was like an obsession.
      “Erm….excuse me?” Ellie mumbled, trying again. The girl said nothing, even as Ellie inched her chair slightly closer to the quiet girl. She gently tapped her on the shoulder but did not even receive a flicker of response. “Hello? Err…Ami? Ami? Can I ask you something?”
     Ami said nothing.
    Irritably, Ellie grasped the other’s shoulder and turned her around so that she was facing her. “Look, Ami! I’m asking you somethi-”
      “I said, leave me alone!!” Angrily, the girl shoved her hand away and kicked at her chair, causing the seat to teeter dangerously to the left. Ellie flailed her hands and legs, fighting to keep balance but it was futile as the chair was already tilting quite precariously on two legs. Finally, gravity took hold and shoved the girl onto the floor, smashing onto the tiled ground with a crash that filled the classroom. Suddenly, everyone’s attention was caught and all heads turned to the direction where the girl had tumbled to the floor amid a jumble of pencils and fallen books.
      “What is going on over there?” Miss Morgans demanded, making Ami’s cheek redden with embarrassment and shame. The teacher marched over and gazed down at Ellie’s fallen form, wincing as she rubbed at the bruises that had formed. With her hands on her hips, the teacher frowned down at Ellie, making the girl slightly more uncomfortable about her position on the floor. “Miss Alicia? Would you mind telling how on earth you managed to get from on top of your chair to down on to the floor? I bet it’s a wonderful tale to hear.”
      A few snickers were heard and Ellie colored slightly, scrambling back onto her feet. At first, she was quite tempted to tell her teacher all about the new girl’s kick at her seat, but when she caught sight of her from the corner of her eye, all anger in her vanished. Ami was biting her lip, shoulders hunched up to her chin with a guilty expression. Her knuckles had gone white from gripping the chair and her pale cheeks had lit up to the color of lava. Changing her mind on the last second, Ellie instead said: “Sorry, Miss Morgans!! I was…uhh…trying to balance my chair on two of its legs and the thing just when crashing down. It won’t happen again!!”
     The teacher squinted behind her glasses. “Oh, really? Well, let this be a lesson to you to never do that again.”
      Just then, a deafening ring erupted from somewhere around the school, filling the quiet classroom with its high-pitched sound. Ellie’s tense form relaxed – saved by the bell.

      “Class dismissed!” Miss Morgans announced as students began to leap up from their seats, clutching their lunch money and all manner of snacks. “Time for recess, everyone.”   

New and Improved 'Elvaeda'

I'm not sure how many of you actually read that crappy story, but anyway, I'm considering on re-writing it. My writing has improved since the time when I wrote that tale, and now I want to re-do it into something...better, you could say. I hope you guys don't mind.

The story's characters will receive new names, including the elf queen and the elf ppl. But the story's purpose does not. The story itself will have a new title, and from now on it shall be referred to as: 'Wildelyn: Journey to the OtherWorld.'

Hope the improved story will be to your liking! That is all ^^

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